spets1   Australia. Feb 26 2013 02:14. Posts 2179
here's a poem i wrote back in 2010.
IF YOUR CHRISTIAN DO NO READ FURTHER.
Priests
Priests abuse little boys
They treat 'em nice
And buy them toys
Tell the kids night stories
To parents: “no worries”
When sun sets down
The church gets loud
The children scream
The priests make cream
The reason for this
Stands as it is
The priests are gay
And need the lay
...(new rhythm)
The church is a boys club
No women in the place
Who else would want to be there
Only fags commit to that faith
Just think about it,
to be a priest
You cannot have a girlfriend
No wife.
No sex.
No one night stand,
You can't do drugs..
play in a band..
The only love,
is in your hand
The only thing you are to do
Is worship God forever
fuck that my friends
I'd join never
But lets imagine
you were gay
The church.
A great idea
There's only boys,
alot of dick
The choice
is pretty clear
I know this story
Brings church no glory
But I despise
This dirty way to paradise
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hola
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mnj   United States. Feb 26 2013 02:18. Posts 3848
A+ 5 stars
but tits next tim plz
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K40Cheddar   United States. Feb 26 2013 03:08. Posts 2202
Not really religious but honestly I felt like that poem sucked.
Plus wtf man where are the chicks at.
GG
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Silver_nz   New Zealand. Feb 26 2013 03:19. Posts 5647
I thought it was pretty funny-cause-it's-true, liked the beat change. maybe with a few changes could use it in standup comedy act ;0
just..
"IF YOUR CHRISTIAN.."
plz make sure to use 'you're' instead of 'your' in future. my eyes burn at the grammar. save my eyes.
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spets1   Australia. Feb 26 2013 04:41. Posts 2179
i dont care about grammar. as long as the meaning is conveyed.
one less thing to worry about
chiiiicks comin up
hola
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Stroggoz   New Zealand. Feb 26 2013 05:06. Posts 5328
i would remove the 'if your christian do no read further' part. Seems to me like this poem should be aimed @ christians.
One of 3 non decent human beings on a site of 5 people with between 2-3 decent human beings
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TampaBayMat   United States. Feb 26 2013 09:10. Posts 249
On February 26 2013 02:08 K40Cheddar wrote:
Not really religious but honestly I felt like that poem sucked.
same
Merlot Fo Sho
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aernout   Netherlands. Feb 26 2013 12:57. Posts 161
isn't it more directed towards Catholics instead of Christians cause of noting all the priests n shit?
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PuertoRican   United States. Feb 26 2013 13:26. Posts 13097
"Religion is regarded by the common people as true, by the wise as false and by the rulers as useful."
Rekrul is a newb
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ToT)MidiaN(   United Kingdom. Feb 26 2013 13:43. Posts 5070
Laughed at the 1 star blog rating due to lack of tna
One day good. One day bad. And some days, even hope
dogmeat   Czech Republic. Feb 26 2013 16:02. Posts 6374
my favourite:
You go to the church, you kiss the cross
You will be saved at any cost
You have your own reality
Christianity
You spend your life just kissing ass
A trait that's grown as time has passed
You think the world will end today
You praise the Lord, it's all you say
Jesus saves, listen to you pray
You think you'll see the pearly gates
When death takes you away
For all respect you cannot lust
In an invisible man you place your trust
Indirect dependency
Eternal attempt at amnesty
He will decide who lives and dies
Depopulate Satanas rise
You will be an accessory
Irreverence and blasphemy
Jesus saves, no need to pray
The gates of pearl have turned to gold
It seems you've lost your way
Jesus saves, no words of praise
No promised land to take you to
There is no other way
ban baal
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wobbly_au   Australia. Feb 27 2013 09:59. Posts 6540
wtf is this shit
The Last Laugh.
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gosuruss   United States. Feb 27 2013 11:08. Posts 30
Isn't there mock human cannibalism at catholic church?
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gosuruss   United States. Feb 27 2013 11:10. Posts 30
spets were you abused by a priest?
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spets1   Australia. Feb 27 2013 14:43. Posts 2179
bahaha, sorry guys i know the poem sorta sucked, thats why i never posted it before, but whatevez, its the thought that counts
hola
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Stroggoz   New Zealand. Feb 27 2013 21:19. Posts 5328
On February 27 2013 10:08 gosuruss wrote:
Isn't there mock human cannibalism at catholic church?
yes, when i was a child, from 5-10 years age every sunday we would eat the flesh of christ(bread) and drink the blood of christ (wine).
kind of unhygienic actually because the whole church would line up and drink from the same cup of wine.
I would try and be a scumbag and drink lots of the wine so people after me couldnt get any. (there was only enough for 1 sip from each person, so 3 sips would mean 2 people miss out lol. )
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