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k2o4 United States. Apr 20 2008 14:57. Posts 4803 | | |
Last night I ended up going through a bunch of my old stories and re-reading em, and I realized 2 things. First, lots of them were not even CLOSE to as good as I thought they were, and second, nearly all of them were about sex. I guess that's what happens when a 16 year old reads Bukowski and decides he can be a writer too.
But I found some good ones in there too and am going to keep reposting em in a random way... Today I'm gonna share a story called "Lying" with everyone because an old friend of mine requested it cause it was one of his favorites. Hopefully you guys like it too.... It's a pretty short one that I wrote for a class in college and actually got an A for it, hehe.
Lying
My vision was blurry as I opened my eyes. The white walls and blue curtains around me blended together giving me an impression of a white cloudy sky. The drugs were still affecting me. I blinked several times to clear my sight, and then examined the room around me. I saw a blue curtain to my left, and a white wall to my right. Straight ahead of me was a counter with a sink, covered by a set of cabinets above it. One cabinet was halfway open and I could see rubber gloves and other medical paraphernalia. I looked down at my chest and saw a blue and white-stripped hospital gown. The stripes were vertical and I followed them down to my leg, which was elevated by a harness coming from the roof. My leg was bandaged. Then I realized where I was.
John had told me the drop wasn’t very far, no more than 10 feet. 10 feet was a joke to me. Unfortunately, it had been 20 feet at the least. I had hit the ground with a loud crunch coming from my right leg, audible to all who were in the area. They had rushed me to the hospital, and straight into surgery. They told me they would insert a metal bar into my leg. I should be able to walk again soon, but until then I would be a gimp on crutches. How I loathed the idea of that. I had always been the risk taker, the adventurer, and the tough guy. Now I was the idiot who jumped out of a tree and couldn’t walk for a couple months.
I was sitting and reminiscing when a nurse came into the room. Well, more than a nurse, a dream nurse. Lets just say this was a fantasy come true, the type of nurse you only see in “Nasty Nurses 3, Lets Play Doctor.” She came in and took my temperature, all the while giving me a warm smile. She told me that my parents were waiting downstairs and that she was going to take me to them in a wheelchair. I made no arguments. I was too stunned and drugged up to do much more than drool and nod my head. She helped slide my legs onto the side of the bed, and then gently lowered me into the wheel chair. She rolled me out of the room, and tried to start a friendly conversation. I couldn’t contribute much as my tongue was hanging out of my mouth.
She took me into the elevator and turned the chair around to face the door again. There were two teenage girls in there, about my age of 14. They paid little interest in me. They looked at the nurse with envy, wishing they could look that good. Then the nurse leaned over me to push the button for level 1, and both of her breasts rubbed against my shoulder. Suddenly I felt a rise in me that would soon be evident to all in the elevator. I was excited by her contact, and anxious to hide that excitement at the same time. As I struggled to turn my mind to other thoughts, “Oprah Winfrey in a bikini, Oprah Winfrey in a bikini,” the nurse made another arousing move. She bent at the waist and put her mouth right next to my ear. She whispered into my ear, mentioning how the girls in the elevator were giving me the eye. I lost it then.
It wasn’t what she said so much as the contact. The warmth of her breath on my ear tickled and aroused me. My gown popped up at the crotch, and there was nothing I could do about it. I turned my head to face the nurse and saw where her eyes were staring. As I got bigger so did her eyes, and then she gasped like she had seen a ghost. I looked in the reflection of the silver elevator doors and saw one of the teenage girls elbowing her friend to get her attention. Then all three of them were staring at me. I started hyperventilating since I was so nervous, but they mistook it for sexual panting. The girls began to laugh with hysteria, and the nurse attempted to cover me up. That was a big mistake.
In her attempt to cover my arousal she touched the sensitive tip of it. I was 14 and this was the most sexual contact I had ever been so lucky as to have. And that sexual contact was all it took to give me my first orgasm with another person present. Where the point of my gown was sticking up began to darken as I let loose, and my breath changed from hyperventilation to that of uncontrollable pleasure. The nurse shrieked and pulled her hand back, then tried to bring her hand in again, then retracted it. She pulled of her sweater and threw it on my lap. The girls were out of control now, gasping for air and clinging on to each other for support. The nurse was disgusted and appalled. Then there was a “ding,” signifying that we had reached the first floor.
The door opened and the nurse pushed me out with amazing quickness. As soon as she had cleared the threshold she looked both ways, and spotted a friend. She called for her friend to come over, and asked them to take me the rest of the way to the lobby. My head was bowed in shame, and the girl’s heads were rolling with laughter. The friend took me the rest of the way to my parents. I never had such an embarrassing moment in the rest of my life.
The campfire lit the faces of my friends as the night air chilled our bodies. I finished retelling this story with a smile on my face. They were all laughing hysterically. Their faces showed shock, disgust, and amazement at what they had just heard. I smiled back at them. Not because I found this funny too, but because I knew every word I had just told them was a lie.
That's it - hope it was entertaining. And as always, plz leave a comment on your way out!
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lebowski Greece. Apr 20 2008 15:17. Posts 9205 | | |
LOL good story
heh I just knew it !
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k2o4 United States. Apr 20 2008 15:18. Posts 4803 | | |
| | On April 20 2008 14:17 lebowski wrote:
LOL good story
heh I just knew it !
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bukowski and lebowski all day long brotha ^^
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sniderstyle United States. Apr 20 2008 15:32. Posts 2046 | | |
big lebowski is my all time favorite movie
probably seen it 150 times |
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thewh00sel  United States. Apr 20 2008 16:42. Posts 2734 | | |
never heard of it. (the big lebowski) |
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thewh00sel United States. Apr 20 2008 16:42. Posts 2734 | | | |
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k2o4 United States. Apr 20 2008 19:55. Posts 4803 | | |
| | On April 20 2008 15:42 thewh00sel wrote:
never heard of it. (the big lebowski) |
go check it out asap - great movie.
I can't claim 150 times, I'm closer to 15. =) |
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RS_II United States. Apr 21 2008 22:43. Posts 748 | | |
fuck that was short story was fantastic, really enjoyed reading it. very funny |
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BenGb Canada. May 06 2008 00:19. Posts 421 | | |
ahah nice one
end is really good |
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