A Poem.

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RaiZ France. Mar 17 2009 09:00. Posts 1503

I want happiness
I seek happiness
To cause your happiness
To be your happiness

So take me
Someplace far away
To a true Elsewhere
Please take me there

Magic that lasts
Never-ending kiss
Revery without break
Unperishable bliss

Take me
I want happiness

Birds sing
Song of unknown tongue
Though winged, they
Still fail to reach the sky

A place not to be treaded alone

So take me
To a true Elsewhere

Wet feathers,
Locked fingers,
Melting flesh,
Fusing minds

Take me
I want happiness

Not your past
But your present is what I seek,
Carefully winding back its fragile thread

Please take me there
I want happiness.

Clover.

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Shin-il : Yeah it was very very very good for me too. Rekrul : YOU MOTHER FUCKING FUCKING SON OF A BITCH

Last edit: 17/03/2009 09:01

EXCELED Canada. Mar 17 2009 10:21. Posts 401

are you sad about something raiz?

NeillyJQ United States. Mar 17 2009 10:56. Posts 8947

its actually really good in many senses, well written.

wrote a few good poems that you can relate to on my blog

http://neillyaa.liquidpoker.net/

Just remember you need to be god damn sure about their tendencies. -Artanis11 http://www.pocketfives.com/profiles/neillyaa/

Last edit: 17/03/2009 11:24

RaiZ France. Mar 17 2009 11:59. Posts 1503

On March 17 2009 09:21 EXCELED wrote:
are you sad about something raiz?

Not really, maybe feeling depressed but that's about it.
I find this poem beautiful, and have been reading it in french which is wonderful aswell.
Probably more coming but they're mostly frenchs, and doubts that we got many poems lovers.

Shin-il : Yeah it was very very very good for me too. Rekrul : YOU MOTHER FUCKING FUCKING SON OF A BITCH