made a new song

this song makes me feel like I am cutting my brain up with razor blades but all trance does that

I like it, but I am not a big fan of the style.

would be sweet if it was a little longer most trance songs are like 10 mins

i like it! really kewl song! what program do you use and how long did it take you to make it? =D

pretty good actually imo

but like, the sounds are all a bit off, tweak them all around a bit imo. and also theres too much going on in a couple of spots around like 1.50, sounds like a bad mixing of 2 songs rather than 1 song a bit.

Alot of potential here. I feel the structure could be re worked slightly which in turn can probably help your mix. Some points;

- The kick is really lacking throughout. First sample is good for your "intro" build up. Perhaps adding more omph later on in the track when it kicks in. Have you tried experimenting sidechaining a comp with a sample ?
- Around 40 seconds, a bassy snyth comes in. It is very boomy on the bottom end. The tone makes the mix quite inconsistent and messy. SOunds like around 180hz or so could be cut out a bit. I would also try adding a comp on this to make the sound a little more balanced, as the attack is slow and builds up from very quiet to quite loud, at which point it sounds boomy.
- gets a little crowded, with the many synths going on around 1:50, and it overpowers the kick. I feel, for Trance, the kick has to be a prominent feature throughout, and it is just not cutting it.

At the moment it kinda feels like it just moves in basic blocks. Try adding more depth to the structure, by adding stops, fills etc etc.

Good luck